in throes of need
and passions kept
and offered truths
in flow
of quickened hearts
in salient beats
beyond each tune
i know
where wet meets force
and strengths decrease
into soft humbled
sphere
in perfect time
to endless tune
with you at last
right here.
I like the wordings you used in this one, Vi. Such as throes, salient, they’re intense and profound, just like the writer.
thank you so! what a compliment coming from you!