try harder aye?

if noble lights

were keen to fall

upon the darkened


who failed to keep

their place in line

and sunk each ship

at port

where lone lost soul

stared blankly forth

at empty

shaken lane

that sighted vessel

faced crest

-and sunk

in sacred

poisoned rain…

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2 Responses to try harder aye?

  1. AinaBalagtas says:

    Deep! And very thought provoking!

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