in vessels quake
of weighted life
i lay me down
in time
at sighed behest
of terra’d break
felled slow
in beauty’s prime
with lid long gone
to lovers war
stood -still
through boundless pain
with fissures swelled
to canyons deep
in shards
of tear filled rain
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Im so glad you do! Thank you much!
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