soft moving hands
silently playing
a rhythmical music
of two
aching bent bodies
curved into one
the old touching space
with the new.
finely formed fingers
exploring the curves
holding lifes breath
in its way
finding the core
of all that needs finding
and willing that feeling
to stay.
lifeofawillow 
very well evoked. line 11, “lifes” needs an apostrophe
hey rich- thanks, so, your a grammar guy. read on then… i rarely punctuate. unless it suits the poems. i tend to use punctuation as nuance- and license. i like that you noticed that though.
i don’t capitalize. punctuation is different because it can change a word or change meaning. for me, capitalization holds no meaning. unless it’s all caps i guess.
i agree that punctuation is different. i am an uncapped person as well 🙂 sometimes i use the ambiguity of the lack of punctuation. sometimes i just choose less. a quirk i suppose.